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Workshop Magic Example #1

I feel the need to share some of the fruits of my last post……from my students’ minds, of course!

Sacajawea
February 6, 2012 @ 4:15 PM 7 Comments

I went on a exploration

out to the open seas

with a dog and two kind sirs

of which  they gave to me

a vote on were we have to stay

and that is all I need

but when were done with are exploration

I say “, A-hi-ee “, A-hi-ee

I want to go back to my family

By: C.
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G.
February 9, 2012 at 8:56 AM
I really liked the format of your story.The word choice was really descriptive! Great job!
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J.
February 9, 2012 at 8:56 AM
Is this a poem Campbell because it is intresting.
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C.
February 9, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Thanks J. !!!!
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G
February 9, 2012 at 9:04 AM
Dear
C.,

I like how you used the a-hi-ee like when we did the thing where we were people from the
exploration. Why did you choose a poem instead of anything else?
Love,
G.
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H.
February 9, 2012 at 9:13 AM
Hi Campbell,
That reminds me of when Sajaea’s calls her family.
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C.
February 9, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Wow! That would make a really good song. You should make up a toon and make it into a song!
Sincerely, Ch.
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C.
February 9, 2012 at 5:06 PM
Well because…… It was hard to not wright the journal entry not like a quote.The other choices I did not want to do.
Does this answer your question ?

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